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More TaX and Kloom

I'd forgotten - the TaX apper immediately resubmitted both characters when they were rejected, changing them completely. This time, they're not related, but.... well, let's just say there's not much improvement, yes?

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Fullname: TeX BloodBane Codename: TeX --+{DRaGoNSLaYeR}+--
Gender: Male Age: 32
Species: Half-Gnome Affiliation: GNoMe PoWeR
Occupation: -=Defending the Galaxy=- Type: FC
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TeX has unread mail.
Email: paradi4283@aol.com

TeX has been offline since Sun Nov 1 21:29:09 1998
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He is a male about 6' '5 . He looks very intelligent.He is wearing all kinds of equipment that would be important for battles.He has Red Blondish Hair with and Pointy teeth.
Carrying:
PARENT: Locker
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TeX's Background - Page 1.
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TeX was born in September 15, 1966, Seattle Washington.He had been a very good boy since he was 12, but when he was a teenager(13) he had seen many ugly and violent things happen in his school. Some of his Friends even forced him to join a gang.So he told the gang leader Brink that he would think it over and give him an answer the next day.So that night he had a decision to make "To join the gang ,or not to join the gang ,that is the question." So he though about it for a while. That night he couldn't decide. He had many reasons not to join and many reasons not to join. He thought to himself If i Join I can have a lot of friends and popular in school, and he also thought to himself, IF i Don't join i don't have to beat up kids and do other bad things . Then he knew what the right answer was it was NO. Why would he want to join a gang ,it was wrong.So the next day Brink came up to him and said "do you want to join or not" so TeX said No (of course) ,But Brink din't want to let him go, lunch was almost over so he said to TeX be at the flag pole after school.So brink came at the pole and there they were the whole gang. So he prayed to the gods "PLeaSe dont let them beat me up ,My mother will kill me if i come home with bruises and a black eye ,oH SO Please dont let them beat me up" So god thinked about it he dint have that much time.But no one could see him but TeX. So God gave him powers to defend himself. He had all kinds of powers. He was nervous and dint know what to do .He knew he had powers but just dint know how they work. So he started running home. HE ran as fast as he could and he went So fast that the gang had not notice that he ran away,then TeX quitely sneeked into the principal's office and told them what the gang was doing .That night he discovered his power ,skills and spells.The next day Brink and the gang members apoligized to him and told him theat they would never pick on anyone else or beatup anyone else.So that was the stroy of his teenage years ,When he was 21 he had decided that he should do something different,Life had been so boring for him.He had signed for the army and he had to do training. It was a challenge for TeX.But he survived he was in the army .He had been in training for 3 years. So he got in the army and he was fighting in wars and battles. He did really well . In the army he told the seargent about his powers .The Seargent said that "How do I know this is now a Joke,Why don't you give me an idea what you can do" .So TeX gave him a few examples of what he could do.The Seargent was Amzed in surprise. So he told TeX that he would make a great Hero and Defender Of The GaLaXy. So the seargent gave him some equipment that the army had created especially for him. Then by the time the seargent told the government ,evryone knew. By the time the government knew they gave news to the president and reporters knew too.Then the whole world knew . In the pront page papers there was a big article about TeX.There was a heading it was called "TeX the Super Hero,Could it be we found the Defender of the GaLaXy?" TeX read the whole story and was very happy.From that day he Defended the Galaxy.
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TeX's Personality - Page 1.
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TeX is a loyal man with Special Skills and Powers.He has powers that are made to defend.His goal was to Defend all living humans and animals in the Galaxy.He had never been so popular before.Now he seems to be a hero to the whole galaxy. By the time he was 24 he wanted to get married. He found a woman in Boston ,MAssachusetts ,her name was Liza.They wanted to get married in one of the Hawaiin Islands.They had 3 kids,there names were Johnathon, Tim, and Sarah. His wife and kids were very proud of TeX. TeX had all kinds of equipment that the family couldn't touch accept TeX since they were dangerous items.So he mostly had life under control.
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Information on TeX's powers - Page 1.
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TeX has the power to Shoot Laser out of his eyes , it enables him to shoot laser out of his eyes when he does not have a weapon.And when he is thirsty he can create spring and drink out of it. He has a power called "Super Speed" which enables him to run Fast ..very fast.
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TeX's Flaws - Page 1.
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I'm very impatient, but try my best to be polite. I can swim but not very well. I have trouble with writing.
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TeX's Skills - Page 1.
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TeX can sap people when he is in combat. TeX can also can wield two weapons at once. He can also backstab when he is wielding a dagger.He can also climb tall buildings and other shelters.
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TeX's Equipment - Page 1.
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-WEAPONS- A DRaGoN CLaW(Wielded on Left Hand) , Dagger Of Death(Wielded On RIght Hand), -EQUIPMENT- Ring Of Wizardry,(Casts Sanctuary On TeX), Cast Copper Ring, A Set Of Overlord Armor, Moon Bracelet(Enables TeX to FLy). Necklace Of Dreams. Heart-Shaped Amulet. Shinister Gloves Of Thievery.The Firestorm Shield. Belt of Pain. DRaGoNSKiN Leggings. Boots Of The Fish. -VEHICLES- A Harley Davidson,or a F-14 Jet Plane
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Aaaaaaaaand......

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Fullname: Kloom BloodBane Codename: ?
Gender: Male Age: 203
Species: Demon Affiliation: +-->The Defender<--+
Occupation: Type: oc
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Email: Wizkidfla@aol.com

Kloom has been offline since Wed Oct 28 15:24:13 1998
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He is about 6'3". He has what looks to be very important equipment for defending himself
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Kloom's Background - Page 1.
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Kloom was born In South Amarica September 13, 1795. He was stobborn and short tempered as a baby-child , but evolved in his early years of being trained by his mother. He live in a demon tribe called "The Defenders of the world". He was very fast in training. by the time he was 43, he learned all the spells and powers that were expected when he would be 90. When he was 45 they didn't know what to train him in next, so he went out on his own. He had reached a tribe of demons unlike his own when he was 50. Instead of learning spells and dicovering powers, they had constructed equipment that he had never seen before. They also told he how to make the equipment him self so he could go back to his home tribe and teach them . He was a high priest by the time he was 58. He was worthy and loyol to his tribe. After a few deckads he returned to his home tribe. There He teached them how to make The equipment. They had made more the they thought they could when he was 65. By the time he was 90 he had learned every spell every power that the demons could learn. He was a master at spells powers and useing equipment. When he was about 102 The tribe had broke apart to inform other demon tribes about they new equipment they have gathered from Kloom. Kloom went to the state of New York,New York when he was 110. now he must go seek a defend the good a justify evil with his spells powers and equipment.
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Kloom's Personality - Page 1.
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He is a very bright a strong demon. He likes to eat, pratice spells and powers, and loves to play with his equipment. His favorit foods are human(only if evil), horse, and bull. His favorit beverages are blood , water, and sprite. He hates to watch inocente people die. He is very patiant. He can't understand why peolpe destroy other people. He is goal is to defend the inocente and justify evil. He can not withstand anoying or bragy people.
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Information on Kloom's powers - Page 1.
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Lightning bolt: Is when I piont to the sky and a lightning bolt comes from the sky and shoots where ever I piont to. Fire Ball: Is when I put my hands about 4 inches away from each other and a ball of fire forms in my hands and i can throw it where ever I want. Laser Shock: Is when I controll my eyes to shoot lasers out of my eyes.
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Kloom's Flaws - Page 1.
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He can't swim, He can't track people, and he can't fly that well.
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Kloom's Skills - Page 1.
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I can breath fire, I can fly, I can blow things away with my wings, and I can call on the forces of good to destroy evil by saying "Daybragay Seenome Raysayymaaay".
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Kloom's Equipment - Page 1.
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A larg steal mace called, "The Mace Of Tristan" it deals 690 damage. A cap called,"The Cap Of Dark Wizardry." it cast fire shield witch rebonces shots or hits sometimes. A amulet called,"The Amulet Of Detection." witch detects invisability. A cloak called,"The Cloak Of Endless Life." witch gives me invisability. And a face guard called,"The Face Guard Of Kraken." witch gives me sancuary witch when a person hits me it does only half the damage.
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Oh, and one more...

Fullname: TaX BloodRush Codename: wOrLdKiLlErX
Sex: male Age: 19
Species: demigod Affiliation: None Set
Team: None Set Position: None Set
Occupation: None Set Type: FC
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Background

I was born in a middle-class neighborhood with my parents.When I was two years old I asked for a gun and Dad said okay as long as I don't hurt anyone, so I lurnt to use it really good. Then my dad was shot by a buggler when i was five and I had to watch. I was so mad but i couldn't do anything so I went to school the next day and some bullies in the schoolyard started making fun of me saying "You're dady got shot, your daddy gott shot!" I went over and started to beat up all the bullies but there were fifteen of them and only one of me so they grabbed me and started to beat me up right back. So I started to cry and said "Oh God I wish I could beat up all the bullies" so God's voice in my head said "Make it so" and suddenly my armes bulged out with Vein-Poping Muscles and I was able to beat up the bullies and everyone cheered me. SO I went home and tryed out all my other Fabulous Powers that I found I had, like flying and blasting people with eyebeems, then i got some bigger guns so i could practice with them more.So I joyned the army when I was 18 and spent four or 5 years killing commies in Russia, when my seargeant looked at my Vein-Popping Muscles and said I looked like a Superhero.SO he geave me lots of Military Equopment and let me out of the army so I could defend the univers from the forces of evil. And that is how I became TaX, Defender Of The Galaxy!

Personality

I try to be nice but sometimes I get mad. My favorit foods is chicken, fish, and vegetables and I like to drink root beer and Sprite. I don't like mean people or bullies or braggy people. My least favorite foods are broccoli and raw eggs.My task is to defend goodness and justify the forces of evilness, and to protect the people and aminals of the world form gun-toting villains. I like to play computers and games, and my girlfriend who I have known for three years and I are going to be married in Jamaika in a few weeks.

Powers

I have a "Magic Shirt of Death" that allows me to fly. I have a hat called the "Hat Of Mighty THinking" that lets me cast fireballs from hot volcanoes for 528 damage. I have a dagger called the "Dagger of Infinite Pain" that causes 578 damage and can disentegreat people. I have a gun called the "Laser Shot of TaX" that does 374 damage and freezes things. I have boots calle dthe "Claws of the Dead Dragon Who I Killed Because I'm Really KewL" that let me run really fast and dodge everything.And I have the "Amulet of Indirection" that dispells invisible things and everything does half damage whiole I'm wearing it.

Flaws

I'm not a very good writer, and I can't lift skyscrapers very well. I'm not too good at ping-pong. I also can only swim in the daytime since I can't see the water at night.

Skills:

I can breathe blastgs of fire that melt steel. I have the ability to do martial arts and I can NeKsLaSh for 836 damage. I can also Backstab for 767 damage.I am a master of every weapon including dagger, sword, whip, mace, lance, spear, bow and arrow, guns, lasers, and bazookas. I can climb buildings really good and walk on tightropes. I can shout out "Hrkkt Bakko Snfllo!!" which calls forth mighty power to destory all evil.And if someone starts to beat me up I can call upon my brother Klom BloodRush who has all the sayme powers I do but is even bigger and powerfuller and I will be making the app for him soon. My final skill is I can sneek around. really well.

Equipment:

I have a pair of leggings made form Dragon muscles claled the "Legs of the Dragon TaX" that let me jump really high in the air and not get huirt by falling really far. I have the "Razor Sharpr Sword of TaX" that cuts trhew anything even admanteum and does 1278 damage that I got from rescuing a sea sprite from a ogre.I have a new belt called th "Belt of Infinite Wishes" that lets me wish for anything I need.And I have the "Mask of Utlimate Defence" that makes anyone who looks at me insane if they try to guess my real identity so I can be a superhero and a normal guy without worrying about being put my piucture in the paper or anything like that.

@desc:

He is about 6'8" with blonde hair. He has bluish-red hair and pointy teeth. He is carrying a lot of powerful esqqipment that makes him look dangerous and he is dressed all in black.

-DS-
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